Chapter One - Page 03

14th Mar 2016, 9:58 PM in Chapter One
Page 03
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)

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Lili 14th Mar 2016, 9:58 PM edit delete
Introducing Caroline Earle this week! It was quite exciting to bring her character to life, considering she never actually appears in Twin Peaks (only her evil Black Lodge doppelgänger...).

N.B.: English isn't my first language. I've written the script without the help of a beta-reader, so if any of the dialogue feels weird, stilted, whatever -- please let me know!
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Travis 16th Mar 2016, 8:34 PM edit delete reply
Seems ok so far, although it is weir that their mouths are always closed while they are talking
MistakeNPotatoes 17th Mar 2016, 5:29 PM edit delete reply
I think it works. I understand it might seem weird but I think the primary goal is to convey emotion for a character in a panel and this way they come across as quiet and reserved. It's sorta peaceful in a way.

I typically draw people talking in panels where they're smiling and grinning, etc., I feel like that's in a similar vein.
Lili 29th Mar 2016, 2:42 AM edit delete reply
@ MistakeNPotatoes: Thanks! And you're right - in a comic, you have only one "frame" to convey an emotion (and not 24 frames per second like in a movie!), so you have to carefully choose which "still" from the scene you draw.

(And let's face it - since there's going to be a LOT of dialogue in this comic, I'd be drawing my characters with their mouths open all the time.)
Lili 29th Mar 2016, 2:36 AM edit delete reply
@ Travis: Ha, I never thought about that! A lot of comic artists do that, and I never thought it could look weird =)
David 28th Apr 2016, 2:00 PM edit delete reply
I'll be sharing this with all of my fellow Twin Peaks fans. Looks great!
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